When I come here and see you guys interested in the series asking questions and giving positive feedback, I really appreciate it, It re motivates me to continue the series and put the effort in every day... Too bad most of the day goes to my day job. Everyone needs to afford living somehow. So when I come home it takes alot to get me to do something I'm not in the mood for, and I'm not always in the mood for Game-Crashers. But it helps to come online and see there are people who are enjoying the series and are curious where I plan to lead it over time.

posted by VeritasEclipse on 27 Jun 2010 05:23 am

HE CAN PLAY THE GAME FROME OUTSIDE AND SHOOT YA DOWN!!!(revenge is sweet though)

posted by digikoopa on 27 Jun 2010 06:28 am

"HIS HAND CAME OFF!!"

Somehow, when I read that line, I imagine he's sayin' it like "Oh, look at that... " XD

posted by rinalicat on 27 Jun 2010 06:36 am

The way he looks makes him look surprised, like he never expected it to happen

posted by Atomic dragon on 27 Jun 2010 11:31 am

I finally got the chance to sit down and read this...all the conversions late at night watching you play Halo and other games has finally gone somewhere, I am proud that you are putting your creative mind to use.

posted by Tw1tch (Guest) on 27 Jun 2010 01:09 pm

Yeah, I've been deciding whether or not I should do that... There's going to be more cussing and blood.... so uh, I'm not sure if I should or not... I think I'll just take it off and see if someone gets annoyed.

posted by VeritasEclipse on 27 Jun 2010 02:50 pm

Hmm. You guys give a good point, Kyrael looks too surprised.... Starting this page I started copying pages off of an old paper version I have.... See, I added the scene where Kyrael holds Eclipse up. Where he says "you do realize you brought me to a world full of...." Forgot about that detail before I copied it down.... Since he already made the realization of Eclipse dying, he shouldn't have been surprised whatsoever. Anyways, I will make adjustments when referring to earlier versions to make it fit in correctly.

posted by VeritasEclipse on 27 Jun 2010 02:58 pm